It comes from nowhere and you can't stop it. Your body starts shaking and sweating.
The first thing to be mentioned is disgusting crawling insects and larvae. Just imagine that these creatures suddenly appear everywhere: falling on your head, making holes in the skin and laying larvae. They leave prints of mucus on your body. When one of the creatures penetrates inside, it starts sucking the organs. Then it eats out paths through the organism making you suffer from agony till the painful death. You lose your life, and your body is in the hands of this monster. What could be worse???????!!!!!!!1
Secondly, there's a sound which leds to the overwrought angst. We think everybody hate really strong noise.
Certainly, after spending few minutes in a such room you would want to get out of there! This noise can effect not on us mentally but physically as well, for instance our pulse or inner pressure may raise or even worse our ears may start bleeding. We don't want anybody to turned up to be there.
The last thing to put in the Room 101 is a virus. Each virus is dangerous in its own way. It can affect you in many ways, and a person even doesn’t know that he or she is dying. The manifestations of the virus are also different, for some, reactions on the skin, for some, organs are affected, tumors appear, etc. A person is dying at different speeds depending on the virus, and you don’t know when exactly the fate will overtake the life.
Certainly, after spending few minutes in a such room you would want to get out of there! This noise can effect not on us mentally but physically as well, for instance our pulse or inner pressure may raise or even worse our ears may start bleeding. We don't want anybody to turned up to be there.
The last thing to put in the Room 101 is a virus. Each virus is dangerous in its own way. It can affect you in many ways, and a person even doesn’t know that he or she is dying. The manifestations of the virus are also different, for some, reactions on the skin, for some, organs are affected, tumors appear, etc. A person is dying at different speeds depending on the virus, and you don’t know when exactly the fate will overtake the life.
This work was written by Nastya Pershikova, Yulya Derevyanko and Sergei Silkov.
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ОтветитьУдалитьnd Sergey, have you finished writing? Your work seems to be incomplete to me. You need to develop the explanation you started writing about the sounds produced by. .. actually, I couldn't figure out by whom because your descriptions stops in the middle. I think you should complete it
Have completed our work, could you please check it one more time?
ОтветитьУдалитьsound which **leds (WF) to the overwrought angst. We think everybody **hate (wf) really strong noise.
Удалитьafter spending **few (art) minutes in **a (art) such art! room
**effect (ww) not **on (prep) us mentally
Check the difference b/w "effect" and "affect" at https://www.vocabulary.com/articles/chooseyourwords/affect-effect/
and then complete the exrcise: https://webapps.towson.edu/ows/exercises/AffectEffectExercise4.aspx
we don't want anybody to ***turned up (WF) to be there.
Not sure what you meant by "turned up to be there": can you explain?
An interesting point of view and well-argumented. The conclusion can be improved, though. Let me remind you that there are special techniques to start and finish your piece of writing in a way that will appeal to the readers. Here is a link to the list: http://writing2.richmond.edu/writing/wweb/conclude.html
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