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How my writing has changed?

Our class of academic writings soon will end. It’s has been a really worthy work that has taught me a lot, I’ve gained some experience, definitely enriched my vocabulary and done hips of exercises. Therefore, it’s a high time to give a synopsis of what has altered throughout the year. In addition to it, I’d like to tell why it is important to have sublime skills of writing. 

These days it goes without saying that it’s a crucial thing to have fairly good skills of writing. Why? Because from the cradle to the grave we are to produce our thoughts and these notions can manifest in verbal or writing format. We will write all our life, from small papers like messages to the more complicated ones like theses. Thus, it is important to have this kind of class by virtue of it helps us not only to express our feelings and thoughts on paper but also to be comprehended by others and that is what we all are seeking. 

My previous essay can provide an apt backdrop how my writing skills have changed. First of all, I studied the structure (Intro; main body; conclusion) and found out that it is important that an essay is composed of five paragraphs. I’ve likewise learnt how to write a good thesis statement that it can’t be too broad and contains only crucial information. Also, we have studied some unique techniques of how to end our essay. Natalya Yurievna has shown us really worthy sources such as Ngram or the writing centre. They can help us to write our father essays. There are far more things we have studied that I’m not mentioning here. Moreover, this academic year I beat my personal record of my previous length of essays and I have written my first a 900-word essay. 

Speaking of my weak points, personally for me it is important to learn new words try to enrich my vocabulary overall. I will work on that more. Also, I have some problems with my grammar, but I think I will figure it out too. 

     Ultimately, it was a pleasure to be enrolled in such course. Although I still have my weak points, but without making mistakes we can’t be taught. My classmates and I have made a fantastic progress, and it has been a productive year of studying and it inspires to me write more.

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  1. Sergey31 мая 2020 г. в 22:38

    Этот комментарий был удален автором.

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  2. Sergey31 мая 2020 г. в 22:40

    A plagiarism report is attached: https://smallseotools.com/view-report/36587b31670e44931af16451dfc10abc

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    1. Natalia Eydelman1 июня 2020 г. в 09:05

      I'm sorry I've just checked your essay for plagiarism again, and none was detected. I need to study in more detail how plagiarism checkers work to make sure they give the correct information. I'm really puzzled about the whole situation. My apologies

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  3. Natalia Eydelman2 июня 2020 г. в 07:44

    Sergey,

    you have analysed the changes in your writing really well and enumerated some of the important changes that have taken place in your writing. Your analysis shows your good understabding of different aspects of writing and their contribution to success in it overall. Your essay about Polyphasic Sleep is really impressive and shows how much your writing skills have developed by now. I hope that based on this foundation you will be able to improve your writing skills further in the future and wish you good luck with it!

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    1. Natalia Eydelman2 июня 2020 г. в 07:46


      Content: 5
      Organisation: 5
      Mechanics: 5
      Language: 5
      References: 5

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    2. Sergey2 июня 2020 г. в 22:23

      Thank you so much for your feedback! It was a pleasure to work with you.

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    3. Natalia Eydelman10 июня 2020 г. в 20:42

      It was a pleasure to work with you too! Good luck with passing the tests and exams! And of course good luck with all your future plans:)!

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