I can't help but agree that nowadays it is crucial to be in touch with others via the Internet. There are a variety of different methods of communications using net such services as videochat, voicecall, email, audio massages and just regular messages. As text and voice messages are the most usable ones it is important to see the pros and cons of each because everyone sooner or later will deal with them.
Some people think it is more convenient to send voice messages. Firstly, it is obviously faster to speak than to type, the average person speaks approximately 100 – 130 words per minute{1} and the average person types between 38 and 40 words per minute. {2} Secondly, it is quicker to listen to messages than to read it. Moreover, another thing is that it is actually safer to send your voice instead of text while driving as you still pay your attention to the road but not to the screen of your phone. In addition to it, sending voice is for sure easier because you do not have to care about the punctuation, misspelling or capital letters.
However, others think that it is not always quite appropriate to send voice messages as it is not polite to listen to message during, for instance, a conference or a meeting. From my personal experience, people who tend to send voice message are more likely to say unnecessary information in it and sometimes it is very annoying.
As for me, I prefer not to use voice messages because I like typing and I think it is more "energy-taken" for our brains. (keeps it in fit). I would never contact my teacher or boss via text, call, Twitter, Facebook or voice mail, at least if she or he starts the conversation themselves there.
In the future I think people will communicate more and more via voice and I'm not really happy of it.
Additional resources:
{1} https://wordcounter.net/blog/2016/06/02/101702_how-fast-average-person-speaks.html
{2} https://www.livechat.com/typing-speed-test/#/
However, others think that it is not always quite appropriate to send voice messages as it is not polite to listen to message during, for instance, a conference or a meeting. From my personal experience, people who tend to send voice message are more likely to say unnecessary information in it and sometimes it is very annoying.
As for me, I prefer not to use voice messages because I like typing and I think it is more "energy-taken" for our brains. (keeps it in fit). I would never contact my teacher or boss via text, call, Twitter, Facebook or voice mail, at least if she or he starts the conversation themselves there.
In the future I think people will communicate more and more via voice and I'm not really happy of it.
Additional resources:
{1} https://wordcounter.net/blog/2016/06/02/101702_how-fast-average-person-speaks.html
{2} https://www.livechat.com/typing-speed-test/#/
Sergey,
ОтветитьУдалитьthanks for your essay. It's quite informative and well-written. What I liked a lot about it is that you have used some interesting examples for support.
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ОтветитьУдалитьa) quicker to listen to messages than to read it: can you spot the mustake?
b) people who tend to send voice message: either an article is necessary or a change in the Ns number
c) Nice try at new word formation: "energy-taken" for our brains but there is a word "energy-consuming" activity. Which one do you like more?
d) keeps it in fit: prep use
keeps it in fit: what does IT refer to?
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Language: 5
Referencing: 4.5